[Mordred]: 676.Contest Entries.Five Words Contest.August 07 | Rating: 0.90 |
2007-08-14 Jenna Rose: I really like this! Nice use of the 5 words. In the first line though, I think "deepest black of midnight" would sound better; "deepest blackness" is a mouthful. But that's just my opinion. Good job!
2007-08-17 pirate witch: I very much aggree with Willow Rose there. Wonderfully written, althoughg "deepest black" would certainly sound cleaner.
2007-08-23 Mordred: Hmm. You're right, both of you. Thank you very much for the input! It's much appreciated.
2007-08-26 Morningstar Rising: Nicely done, I like very much.
2007-08-26 Mordred: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
2007-08-27 Morningstar Rising: welcome.